Lois:
Front cover - I really like the image and the font looks clear. The only thing I would criticise is that there is no price on it or barcode.
Contents page - The contents page is very interesting. It's simple but I like it because it's unique.
Double page spread - The double page spread is my favourite and you've taken good ideas from other magazines and used them which I like. There's nothing I would criticise about it.
Marwa:
The mast head and text on all your pages are very clear, including the subheadings and incentives. I like your drawings as we can see the shots very clearly and angle of gaze in each. Although, you could have used colour so we have a clearer image of your flatplans overall and also gain an insight of your final magazine.
Parina:
I really like the front page and the writing style. The pose of the model for the contents page and the layout of the writing is good. But for the double page spread I think you should add the pull quote onto the second page so it's with the image. You could also add some advertisement like apple gift cards because it's related to music on the contents or double page spread.
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